In a methodical build...
Wait, let me back up. Before the story begins, Harry Hughes has chosen to insert a prologue. An iffy prospect if done poorly. But, Hughes starts THE BAIT SHACK out with a bang - in the throes of a gruesome murder. Hughes carries the murder through the entire length of the prologue. He writes his prologue by visiting and revisiting the act all the while being completely immersed in the mind of the victim. And, when you think she has suffered quite enough, you're dead wrong (forgive the pun). The disemboweling murderer keeps at her. He keeps torturing this poor woman until the very end. It's the most agonizing murder scene I've ever read and Hughes quite purposefully has written it this way. He makes the reader lie down next to the victim as the murderer pierces her skin - plunging the knife in deeper - slices up her skin, smokes a cigarette while she lays in a pool of her own blood, close to death and then finally finishes her off. You think that's a long sentence? Just wait until you read the prologue. You're there with the characters every step of the way. It's a brutal depiction of a heinous crime and a depiction that Hughes has captured eloquently, if that can be said about a murder. He's prolonged the writing of this scene with intention. In order for the reader to understand the murderer's nature, the slow exhaustive death of the victim, and I think also in part, to understand Harry Hughes - this meticulous author leaves nothing to chance.
Okay, now... in a methodical build of staging and conflict, characters and convergence, Hughes writes the perfect mystery. A dark and eerie thriller at times but always at a page-turning pace, THE BAIT SHACK left me feeling like I had just had some of the best most rigorous sex of my life but with the skankiest guy. After I finished THE BAIT SHACK I felt like I wanted to take a shower. The story is funny. It's creepy. It's like covering your eyes from seeing something you don't want to see but then opening your fingers because, well, you just have to watch.
Hughes writes in a crisp and tantalizing manner. The dark sardonic story found in THE BAIT SHACK is so out there at times, that I found myself turning my head and saying, "Good lord." And, that's a good thing. I want to feel something when I read a book.
Many times I wanted to ask Hughes why he went from A to B in the plot but then as I read along, and, as with any fine writer, he answered my questions brilliantly and usually with such complete and utter creativity that he left me breathless. As a writer myself, I felt envious of Hughes' ability to be so organically complex and then be able to comb through all of his built-in complexities with satisfying resolutions.
Hughes takes the genre of mystery to a new height. His writing style is unlike any one else's I've read. He sets a new standard for authors to shoot for.
Harry Hughes has found in THE BAIT SHACK a narrative thrust that makes the story an absolute pleasure to read. Well done, Mr. Hughes.
Now, what's next?
-Susan Wingate, author of "Bobby's Diner" and "Of the Law"
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