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Elom Hardcover – March 4, 2008
Fire from the Goddess and the meat and furs of the mammoth are all that the People need to live. It is a harsh life but a good one and it is one that all cherish.
Young Geerna knows that the time has come for her to become a woman and take up the tasks to keep her people safe. She waits in the Awakening Place, fearful and hopeful as her ordeals come to an end. Then, on the eve of her Womanhood, a shining light descends upon her and her world is torn asunder.
And she embarks on a journey that none of her people could ever envision...
Eons have passed. Cycle upon cycle the Way of the People have remain unchanged: women are artists, men are hunters. Geerna’s Law is the covenant by which humans live in harmony and peace.
But all is about to change. A call has come for The People to choose their champions, and a summons to meet the mysterious creatures who selected Geerna so long ago.
All is unknown. As the brave souls who are chosen venture forth, they will come to discover just how much that pact that Geerna made so long ago has cost them.
And they will have to confront the choices that might help them to finally know true freedom.
- Print length544 pages
- LanguageEnglish
- PublisherTor Books
- Publication dateMarch 4, 2008
- Dimensions5.75 x 1.75 x 8.5 inches
- ISBN-100765317850
- ISBN-13978-0765317858
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William H. Drinkard, an Alabama native, is a life long SF addict and novice SF writer. His main interest is SF novels with realistic alien cultures. He collects old books and first editions (non-SF, mostly 18th & 19th century works); he also collects Pre-Colombian Art and Middle-Eastern artifacts. He is the outgoing Chairman of the Alabama Historical Commission, which has charge of the State Capitol plus many of the state’s historical sites. In his multifaceted life, he has been the VP of an advertising agency, a politician, hospital administrator, and real estate developer. He now operates a consulting business. Drinkard earned a BS at Auburn University and a MBA at Jacksonville State University. Elom is his first novel.
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- Publisher : Tor Books; First Edition (March 4, 2008)
- Language : English
- Hardcover : 544 pages
- ISBN-10 : 0765317850
- ISBN-13 : 978-0765317858
- Item Weight : 1.4 pounds
- Dimensions : 5.75 x 1.75 x 8.5 inches
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William Drinkard is not your typical debut novelist. He served in the Alabama State Legislature for twelve years, and even was the Senate Majority Leader. He's still involved with politics, but not as an elected official. When one hears such things, one wonders, "Yeah, but can he write?"
In my opinion, the answer is a resounding yes.
The novel starts when the young Geerna is preparing for the ceremony that will make her a woman. Her devotion to her goddess, Shetow, is unquestioned, so when light appears and when it takes her up to the heavens, she believes that she is going to Shetow.
Next, we are transported untold thousands of years to a gathering of female clan leaders known as Medoras. They share the world of Elom with an alien species known as drak, who are a sort feathered lizardmen. The drak have notified them that it is time for the Second Judging, a time long-foretold when Shetow would decide if the People are worthy enough to continue existing. They decide to use an unexplained Trait that the Medoras were given at the last Progression (which is about equivalent to an "eon," or an "Age" for Robert Jordan fans) to decide who would become a representative. The candidates must be selected by the conclusion of the upcoming mating ritual, where young people compete for the privilege of procreating.
Along the way, we learn that the People have lived according to a Covenant that Geerna made with Shetow in order to be given their second chance. Men are hunters and women are artists. There are other occupations of course--no society could function with only two jobs--but it is forbidden to cross these gender lines. Everyone's lives has one purpose--to improve the race for the Second Judging by selective breeding certain traits of intelligence, artistic ability and physical prowess.
The rest of the novels is about these eventual representatives, their competition and selection, and their enlightenment as to what is really behind the Second Judging. Seven are selected, three men and four women. They vary in age from sixteen to about twenty. A great deal of time is spent with their various rivalries and love lives, and how they eventually pair up. However, this is interspersed skillfully between revelations about the Second Judging, the nature of the drak, the truth behind a mark most of them have on their skin and the fate of the artwork that the women of the twenty-four tribes has labored for centuries to produce.
A surprisingly short amount of time was spent on the mating competition, but in retrospect I would not have enjoyed reading about contest after contest. I really enjoyed the way Drinkard revealed more and more of the secrets of Elom while the characters made their travels, and few of the secrets were anything I expected. I enjoyed a scene toward the end when the three human races of Elom--collected from Earth at various points in the past--see each other for the first time. I just wish that they all had a chance to actually interact with each other.
The writing is unaffected yet lyrical, and absolutely riveting. This novel is definitely a candidate for a reread. As I came closer to the end, I began to wonder if this novel is the start of a series, since it became clear that something I expected to happen would not happen. However, the ending--which I found reminiscent of a certain encounter in Carl Sagan's Contact--made the possibility of a sequel ambiguous. The story feels like it came to a conclusion, yet it definitely hints that the adventures of the seven are far from over.
But let's get past all that, because in the beginning I was enjoying the story quite a lot. The characters were likable, the action moved along well, and the relationships were developed nicely. The culture is primitive-but-knowledgeable, and the plot pulls you along toward the point where the main characters compete in an annual contest to determine selection of life partners. I liked the way the author showed the interactions of the characters based on their personalities and history.
I still want to like this novel, but there are serious flaws that I must point out. Let's start with what seems like an adolescent fascination with the touchy-gropy part of teen relationships. I was particularly disappointed in the seemingly-mature and level headed Seeker who couldn't keep himself from falling in love with whichever girl he happened to be looking at. The 20th time I read a paragraph where one of the males gazes longingly at the exquisite form of one of the females, I was tired. The 30th time I was .. well .. something beyond tired.
Then, the novel takes its time exploring the terrain the characters pass through without relating it to the plot. There are dead end scenes such as an escape during which the lead characters roam about and gain important clues only to find out the "escape" was permitted and the "clues" were all immediately explained. Indeed, the entire novel seems to be about the protagonists unraveling the mystery of their existence, only to have it handed to them (implanted in their brains no less) toward the end. What was the point of all the sleuthing?
But the biggest problem I have with this book is (SPOILER ALERT): the central plot element, the judging of humanity, never takes place! At least not within the narrative of this book, and it isn't clear that it ever will. It's almost like a big "never mind" at the end. What the ... ? I was hanging on to see how that would unfold. Then I was 10 pages from the end, then 5, then 2, and I'm like IT'S NOT GOING TO HAPPEN!
If Drinkard writes a second novel, I might be inclined to pick it up, just to see if he has addressed these defficiencies in his writing. I wanted to like this book, and maybe I WILL like the next one.
Every reader and enthusiast that wants to rediscover the roots of science fiction itself should read ELOM. They won't be disappointed.